This is our first draft of the script. This was not very good as there were many improvements to be made. This script was not detailed enough as I didn't describe the coast Sanaa will be wearing and it didn't have enough stage directions. Furthermore I did not include what was going to be said in the voice over. I also realised that I didn't say what the surprise was and therefore the audience would have been confused.
This is our second draft of the script. This was really good as it was very detailed and is giving a direction towards what the shot list would be like.
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